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:iconj1mmyj6zz:
Woo, my first critique!

The first thing that caught my eye with this photo is the strong composition and the motif itself. The rails and the person standing on them lead the eye through the photo very nicely, and I love the texture of the rails. The silhouette of the person also makes the photo very appealing as it is not too present but also dark enough to immediately be recognized as the main focus.

Also, the tree on the left fits very nicely with the black frame, and I'm usually not a fan of frames like this one.

The only thing that irritate me a bit is the second person on the right, I think it would be interesting to see the photo with the person retouched out. However, that's only me and my personal opinion.

All in all a lovely work, well done!
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:iconnightshadevalentine:
There's something really special about this picture :D
I can't quite put my finger on it... the balance? the lack of colour?
Whatever it is, it works wonderfully! XD
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:iconnightshadevalentine:
You're welcome <3

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:iconlieutenantdeath:
I really like the contrast and variations of values in this photo; and how the tracks lead you into the picture. Nice work! :D
:icondanielegrigo:
amazing shot!

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:iconenter-stinky:
A really great shot, Everything looks perfectly balanced and it really is just a lovely photo :) Keep up the great work! :D

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:iconalondra-chui:
My first critique. Sorry if it's bad.

Usually I'm not one for black and white photos but I really like this one. I like the silhouette of the tree and the person on the railway track as it really stands out against the middle grey and softer greyer tones in the fore ground. And I like the second person in the picture as it make it different to the other pictures you see that are like this.

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Congrats! You have been featured here [link] please fav the article to help yourself get seen, and don't forget to check out all the other great pics :D

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Thanks for including me in the article :hug:

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:iconloriele:
no prob :)

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